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Band 5+: You and your family are moving to another country for work, and you are looking to buy a house there. Write a letter to a property agent. In your letter: Introduce yourself and your family Describe the type of accommodation that you hope to find Give your preference for the location of the accommodation

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To Whom it May Concern,

I am writing this letter to ask for your assistance to find a new house at Calgary, Alberta as me and my family are moving there.

My name is Harnisha Patel, I will be relocating with my parents and my sister. I got the job in Sofiane foods Inc. We are hoping to relocate at the end of May.

We are interested in buying small house with two rooms, one kitchen and one bath, which have beautiful scenery out around the house and have space to make small temple for our God. for

If you could suggest a house near to my job location at 355 university avenue Sofiane foods Inc, it would be appreciated. Most importantly, we would prefer to have easy commuting or walking distance from the grocery stores and malls to our living location.

I hope you will be able to help with our relocation. I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Your faithfully,

Harnisha Patel.

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

house: 4

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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses the task by introducing the writer and their family, describing the type of accommodation they are looking for, and giving their preference for the location. However, there are some lapses in content, such as not providing details about the family members and their specific needs, as well as not fully describing the type of accommodation desired. To improve, consider providing more specific details about the family and their requirements for the new house.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally coherent and cohesive, with the message being mostly easy to follow. However, there are some issues with paragraphing and the flow of ideas. To enhance coherence and cohesion, consider organizing the information into more distinct paragraphs and ensuring a smoother transition between the introduction, accommodation description, and location preference.

Lexical Resource

The letter demonstrates some flexibility and control in the use of vocabulary, but there are instances of imprecise language and limited lexical resource. To improve, aim to use a wider range of vocabulary more accurately and precisely, and consider incorporating more sophisticated lexical features to enhance the overall quality of the language used.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

While a variety of structures are attempted, there are noticeable grammatical errors and inaccuracies throughout the letter. Punctuation and grammar need improvement for better accuracy. To enhance grammatical range and accuracy, focus on using appropriate punctuation and grammar more consistently and accurately.

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