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Band 6+: You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: -give details of your study plans -explain why you want to get a part-time job -suggest how your friend could help you find a job

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Dear Ahmed,

I trust my email finds you well. I’m excited to share my decision that I’ve made to pursue my studies in the city that you have been living in since 2020. I’m reaching out to seek your assistance in finding a part-time job to support my university expenses.

To outline my study plan, I’currently enrolled in 10 credits for the semester. My weekdays are filled with classes from 7 AM until midday with free schedule on Fridays and weekends.

Considering the coast of living, eager to work to independently cover my expenses as my father is facing financial instability, and can provide assistance.

I’m looking for a job that might work with my academic pursuits. I greatly appreciate any help you can offer, connecting me with opportunities in my field of study if any of your acquaintances are seeking, and please kindly direct me to them.

Warm regards,

Word Count: 150

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter addresses the task well by giving details of study plans, explaining the reason for wanting a part-time job, and suggesting how the friend could help. However, there could be more specific details provided about the study plans and how a part-time job would benefit the writer's academic pursuits.

Coherence & Cohesion

6.5

The letter is mostly coherent and cohesive, with a clear structure. However, there are some minor issues with cohesion, such as the abrupt transition between discussing study plans and the need for a job. Additionally, some sentences could be more smoothly connected for better flow.

Lexical Resource

6.5

There is a good range of vocabulary used, and the writer demonstrates control over language. However, there are a few awkward phrases and minor errors that slightly affect the overall lexical resource score. Try to use more varied vocabulary and expressions to enhance the lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

6.5

The letter shows a good range of grammatical structures, but there are some errors in sentence structure and punctuation that impact the overall score. Proofreading for grammatical accuracy is recommended to improve the score in this aspect.

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