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Band 5+: You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: -give details of your study plans -explain why you want to get a part-time job -suggest how your friend could help you find a job

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Dear John,

Through this letter, I want to inform you that I am coming to Toronto for my higher studies in September. I need your help regarding employment.

My visa for Canada got approved last week only, I have commenced my plans for coming there. I have been accepted at Humber College in Computer Technician course. I already made arrangements for my accommodation with my cousin who is living in the same city. Instead of this, I require your assistance in finding a job for me. As you discussed with me earlier that jobs are hardly found nowadays. It would be very nice of you , if you can search work for me beforehand. Moreover, I will also share my resume with you, so that you can use it for job hunt. Since, you have been residing there from four years, you might have quite a lots of connections, Therefore, you can refer me somewhere for a job.

Lastly, I will be grateful for your help. I am eager to see you soon.

Thanks.

Regards,

Param.

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all aspects of the task. It provides details about the study plans, explains the need for a part-time job, and suggests ways the friend can help find a job.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally well-organized, but there are some minor issues with flow and sentence structure. The ideas are presented in a logical order, but the transitions between paragraphs could be smoother.

Lexical Resource

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, but there are a few instances where more precise or sophisticated language could be used.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are some grammatical errors that affect the overall clarity and fluency of the letter. The use of punctuation and sentence structure could be improved.

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