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Band 5+: You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: -give details of your study plans -explain why you want to get a part-time job -suggest how your friend could help you find a job

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Dear Fathema,

I am just writing this letter with regard to my interest that I would like to do a part-time work while I am studying. Also,I explore that I enquire an information with some help for my part-time work.

Firstly, recently I have completed my graduation and I need to take higher education for my job. Not only it is required for me but also as much as possible I need to achieve good quality experience and gain job related relevant knowledge as well.If I do study in foreign country, I can gain excellent knowledge about my job.

However,my family is poor and they do not give my college cost, and I would like to do part-time job while I am studying. Because,I am a good student and I am a planing that I could do a high level job, when I completed my college study.So,I can help my family from my higher salary.

I suggested that I am looking for a job, So,when I am starting the job at that time my friend could help me about it how I should start and complete it.

If you responed to my letter, I will feel delighted.

Yours faithfully,

Sultana.

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Overall Band Score

5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

part-time: 3

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Task Response

5.5

The letter adequately addresses the task, but it could be more detailed and organized. The letter could benefit from a clearer explanation of the study plans and a more specific request for help.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter lacks a clear flow and logical progression of ideas. The writing is disjointed and difficult to follow at times. The use of paragraphs could be improved.

Lexical Resource

5

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, but there are some instances of inaccurate or inappropriate word choices. The language could be more precise and sophisticated.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that affect the clarity and fluency of the writing. The use of tenses and sentence structures could be improved.

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