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Band 5+: You are organizing a class reunion. Write a letter to your former classmates. You should include: - Explain why you are organizing the reunion - Suggest a location, date and time - Suggest activities and ask for their ideas and preferences

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Greetings my fellow former classmates,

I am writing this letter to you as I will be organizing the reunion since I know really great fancy places where we can hold this reunion at. I would like to host it in Plames Riverside, on April 23rd. It is a great place for an outdoor activity and the aesthetic of the place is quite suitable for this reunion as the temperature today is perfect for this event. I have also considered multiple activities like bingo, our favorite game to play when we were bored, and chess. If you would like, you can suggest more ideas and activities to do for our reunion.

Thank you.

Warm regards, your former classmate Sam.

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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

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Task Response

The letter addresses all the requirements of the task, explaining the reason for the reunion, suggesting a location, date, and time, and proposing activities while inviting further suggestions. However, the tone could be more engaging and the suggestions could be more detailed to enhance the letter's impact. For example, elaborating on why you are organizing the reunion beyond just knowing 'great fancy places' would add depth. Also, providing a specific time and more varied activity options would be beneficial. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

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The letter is generally coherent, but the flow could be improved with better transitions between ideas. Consider using more varied cohesive devices to link sentences and paragraphs more smoothly. For example, you could add a sentence at the end to summarize the main points.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there's room to enhance it with more specific and varied word choices. For instance, instead of 'really great fancy places,' you could use more descriptive and evocative language to describe the venue. Also, try to use synonyms to avoid repetition.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains grammatical errors and phrasing issues that affect clarity. Focus on improving sentence structure and ensuring correct tense usage. Review the letter carefully for errors in subject-verb agreement, article usage, and punctuation. Vary your sentence structures to enhance readability.

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