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Band 4+: You are organizing a potluck dinner for your book club members and want to invite each of them to participate. Write a letter to a member inviting them to the potluck dinner. You should include: - the theme of the dinner, if any - the date, time, and location of the dinner - what kind of dish they should bring to share, considering any dietary restrictions.

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I am arranging a potluck dinner and inviting you to join. The potluck dinner is only for our book club members.

The theme of the dinner is cook without fire. I have thinked many different themes. But decided cook without fire, because book club members includes all ages. Especially considerning lot of older people in the group. So please bring the vegetables, Fruits and whatever your food prepartion required.

Considering the working people in the book club I have decided have the potluck dinner at Central park on December 17th 2025 at 7:30 onwards. Please plan and be available 30 minutes before.

Please bring Biriyani, deserts, fruits and vegtables. Do not bring any oil fried foods.

Yours faithfully,

Santhoshkumar N

Word Count: 120

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4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

dinner: 4

potluck: 3

bring: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses all the requirements of the task, including the theme, date, time, and location, and provides guidance on the type of dish to bring. However, there are some minor grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that could be improved. For example, the sentence "I have thinked many different themes" should be "I considered many different themes." Also, the request for dishes is a bit broad and could be more specific to avoid duplicates. Overall, the letter is clear and informative but could benefit from some refinement in language and detail. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization is somewhat unclear, and the flow of ideas could be improved. Consider structuring the letter with a clear introduction stating the purpose, followed by specific details about the potluck, and a concluding remark. Using transitional phrases can help connect ideas more smoothly. For example, you could use phrases like 'In addition to,' 'Furthermore,' or 'Therefore' to link sentences and paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is generally adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in terms of variety and precision. For instance, instead of saying 'whatever your food preparation required,' you could use more specific terms like 'any necessary ingredients' or 'items needed for your dish.' Expanding your range of vocabulary will make your writing more engaging and effective.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. For example, 'I have thinked many different themes' should be 'I have considered many different themes,' and 'considerning lot of older people' should be 'considering many older people.' Pay close attention to verb tense consistency, subject-verb agreement, and correct use of articles. Reviewing basic grammar rules and proofreading carefully can help reduce these errors.

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