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Band 5+: You are planning a short visit to a city where one of your relatives lives. Write a letter to your relative. In your letter: • Explain when and how long you will be in town. • Ask whether you can stay at their home. • Offer to pay for yourself. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ..., You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear David,

How are you? I hope you are in a good condition.

I am going to Paris for two weeks from the end of this month for holiday. I want to visit Eiffel and try some traditional foods. I hope you are free, so you can accompany me and took me to the beautiful places in Paris. I found a problem with finding a suitable hotels. Most of hotels near Eiffel has fully booked because high seasons. I tried to looking for hotels a little bit far from city, but it has already booked also.

Would you give me reccomendation about good and not to expensive hotels or if you do not mind, could I stay in your house during my holiday? It is okay if I have to paid the rent or maybe I could treat you some foods.

I am awaiting your reply as soon as possible.

Thank you.

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

hotels: 4

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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. More detail could be added to enhance the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter's message is mostly clear, but the flow could be improved with better paragraphing and sentence structure. Some ideas are presented in a disjointed manner.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate, but a wider range and more precise word choices would strengthen the letter. Some lexical errors are present.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

While the letter conveys the main message, there are several grammatical errors that affect clarity and fluency. Improved grammatical accuracy is needed.

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