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Band 4+: You are planning to go and study English at a school overseas. You would like some information about their courses. Write a letter to the school. In your letter  ask about the school  say what kind of accommodation you want  mention any special requests you have (for example diet).

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Dear sir or Madam,

The reason why I am addressing this letter to you is that I want to ask about you school because I am planning to visit and study english at your school.Also,I want to stay really comfortable, affordable and new hotel accommodation.

To be honest,I would be great if you inform me about the school facilities. Besides this,I would be appreciate if you give me some information about the school prices and lessons.

Honestly,I want really reliable and comfortable accommodation in order to stay in there.if it possible, it will be on second floor because I really afraid in first floor.Currently ,the weather is really freezing and cold and it must be special central heating and air conditioner for me.

So,I am going to request some special situation which need for me all the time.I have some annual treatment for curing of disease as well as hotel’s employee must always do for me some tasty meals and they will give me an useful fruits because they beneficial for my health.

I am looking forward to hearing you soon.

Yours faithfully,

Ruhshona Ermatova.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

really: 4

about: 3

school: 3

because: 3

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Task Response

The letter partially addresses the task by asking about the school, mentioning the type of accommodation desired, and including special requests. However, the information provided is somewhat vague and lacks specific details. It would be beneficial to include more specific questions about the courses, accommodation options, and special requests.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is somewhat coherent, but there are some issues with cohesion. The ideas are not consistently organized, and there are abrupt transitions between sentences. Additionally, the paragraphing could be improved to enhance the overall structure of the letter.

Lexical Resource

There is an attempt to use a range of vocabulary, but some words are repetitive or awkwardly used. More sophisticated and varied vocabulary could be employed to enhance the overall quality of the letter. Additionally, there are some errors in word choice and phrasing that affect the clarity of the message.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

While there is an attempt to use a variety of sentence structures, there are several grammatical errors throughout the letter. Punctuation and sentence structure could be improved for better clarity and accuracy. Proofreading for grammar and punctuation would be beneficial.

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Band 4+: You are planning to go and study English at a school overseas. You would like some information about their courses. Write a letter to the school. In your letter  ask about the school  say what kind of accommodation you want  mention any special requests you have (for example diet).

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