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Band 6+: You are taking a course at a local college. The deadline for your project was last week but you haven t finished it. Write a letter to your lecturer. In your letter introduce yourself explain why you haven't handed in the project yet request more time to do it.

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Dear Michelle,

My name is Gurleen kaur. I am a First Year student of Recreation and The Leisure Services in the Canadore College. I am writing this letter to tell you that I have not completed the Sports Management project that you gave us and it was due last week.

The reason behind this is that I lost my mother in my home country , India last week . It was a shocking incident for me and my family. Because of this incident, I got depressed and was unable to focus on my studies. Even the doctor suggested me to take rest. I am a bright student in your class and I always complete my assignments and projects on time. This is the first time I had not been able to complete it on time.

Therefore, I request you to understand my situation and allow me some extra time to finish my project. I would really appreciate your help and will make sure it will not happen again in the future.

Yours Faithfully,

Gurleen kaur

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6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter appropriately addresses all requirements of the task, providing a clear introduction, reason for not completing the project, and a request for more time. The explanation is relevant and sufficient. Minor improvements could include adding a specific timeframe for the extension request and briefly mentioning how you plan to catch up.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally well-organized and easy to follow. The purpose of the letter is clear from the beginning, and the progression of ideas is logical. However, consider using more varied cohesive devices to further enhance the flow and connection between sentences and paragraphs. For example, you could use transition words or phrases to signal the relationship between ideas more explicitly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate and generally accurate. However, there are opportunities to use more precise or sophisticated language to express your ideas more effectively. For example, instead of 'shocking incident,' you could use a more nuanced phrase like 'deeply distressing event.' Expanding your range of vocabulary would enhance the overall impact of your writing.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter demonstrates a good command of grammar, with only a few minor errors. While the errors do not significantly impede understanding, addressing them would improve the overall quality of your writing. Pay close attention to verb tense consistency and subject-verb agreement. Reviewing basic grammar rules and proofreading carefully can help minimize these errors.

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Band 6+: You are taking a course at a local college. The deadline for your project was last week but you haven t finished it. Write a letter to your lecturer. In your letter introduce yourself explain why you haven't handed in the project yet request more time to do it.

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