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Band 4+: You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, explain why you want to take time off work give details of the amount of time you need suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

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Dear ma’am or Sir

I hope you are doing well, I am writing this letter to ask you that I need some time off because what really makes me ask it is my grandfather, he is so sick and I need to go their vilage which located in Shahriyar to see him. So I need a week off to go there and acompany him in his hardship above all, if something happen to him I will have a clear councientiousness. By the way, do not be worry about my job I will assign my tasks to one of my friends who is trustworthy and capable of doing my job. I really appreciate your empathy moreover I am looking forward to seeing your respond.

Besties.

Atena.

Word Count: 125

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

5.5

The letter adequately addresses the task by stating the reason for leave, duration, and proposed work coverage. However, it could benefit from a more formal and structured approach. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is mostly understandable, but the flow could be improved with better sentence structure and paragraphing. The numerous grammatical errors impact the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is sufficient but lacks sophistication and range. More precise and varied word choices would enhance the letter's impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that significantly affect clarity and overall impression. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial.

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