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Band 4+: You cannot continue your course in past time. Write a letter to your teacher

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Dear Prof. Karl,

I am writing to inform you that for unknown reasons I cannot continue your course.

The couse is I will go to the Japan in next month. If I go to the Japan I cannot come to lesson’s But I will continue after I come to Usbekistan. And another point is my family finance is so bad.

Futhomemore, in several years I will be come in Uzbekistan a strong business man and I would like to launch my learn centres, supermarket an gasolin. Before this I will learn all of things in your course. Maybe I will come in two years.Don’t forgive me!

Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to your responce.

Your sincerly

Bexruz Xudoyqulov

Word Count: 123

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Overall Band Score

4
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.
Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

5
The letter addresses the task but includes some irrelevant information. The reasons for discontinuing the course are mentioned, but the letter also veers into future plans which detract from the main purpose. To improve, focus on clearly and concisely explaining the reasons for leaving the course and avoid including unrelated details. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

3
The letter's coherence is significantly impacted by unclear explanations and abrupt transitions between ideas. The reasons for discontinuing the course are not clearly presented, and the connection between going to Japan and financial difficulties is not well-established. Paragraphing is present but doesn't effectively separate distinct points. To improve, focus on clearly outlining each reason with supporting details in separate, well-structured paragraphs. Use transitional phrases to link ideas and ensure a logical flow.

Lexical Resource

4
The vocabulary used is basic and lacks the precision needed to convey the intended meaning effectively. There are instances of inappropriate word choice and limited range. To enhance lexical resource, try to use more specific and varied vocabulary related to academic and personal circumstances. Consider using a thesaurus to find alternative words and phrases that can express your ideas more accurately. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3
The letter contains frequent grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward sentence structures. These errors impede understanding and detract from the overall quality of the writing. To improve grammatical accuracy, focus on reviewing basic grammar rules and practicing sentence construction. Pay close attention to verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and the correct use of articles and prepositions. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors.

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