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Band 5+: You had arranged to meet a close friend for a day out, but due to unforeseen circumstances, you were unable to make it. Write a letter to your friend explaining why you missed the meeting. You should include: - an apology for not being able to attend - a detailed explanation of the reason for your absence - a suggestion for rescheduling the outing.

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Dear …….,

Long time no see, I hoped you’re doing well! For those days waiting to our meeting after your messages, I’m very apologise to turn down it.

Due to being stress and having too many homeworks which are given by my teacher in school, I can’t manage my time effective. Additionally, I have a important test which impact on my overall score. Thus, I seem to be full of times now and the next two weeks.

I write this letter to send the apology to you, and sorry to give you a reply at the moment that you give me your suggestion. I hope you understand my difficulties.

Anyway, I have been gone to this cinema one times since 2018. Do you have time to go with me in the first sunday of the following month? The quality of visuals’ films in this one is reliable, I think you will be sastified.

In conclusion, wish you have a good time with your family and have a good day. Please reply as soon as possile.

Best wishes,….

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter addresses all the requirements of the task, including an apology, explanation, and suggestion for rescheduling. However, there are some lapses in tone and formality, and some language inaccuracies. To improve, focus on using more natural and formal language, and ensure correct grammar and sentence structure throughout the letter.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's coherence is affected by organizational issues and abrupt transitions between ideas. The introduction is weak, and the explanation of your absence lacks clarity. The shift to suggesting a new outing feels disconnected. Improve the flow by using transitional phrases and organizing your points logically. For example, clearly state your apology, then explain the reason for missing the meeting, and finally, suggest an alternative plan.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and sometimes inappropriate ('homeworks,' 'full of times'). There's a lack of precision in expressing your reasons and suggesting the alternative outing. Enhance your lexical resource by using more varied and accurate vocabulary to convey your message effectively. For example, instead of 'full of times,' you could say 'very busy' or 'overwhelmed.' Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing ('I'm very apologise,' 'turn down it,' 'gone to this cinema one times'). These errors impede understanding. Focus on using correct grammar and sentence structures to improve clarity. Review basic grammar rules and practice constructing accurate sentences.

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