Band 7+: You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter correct the information in the article explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am excited to come across your recently published article in your international travel magazine, which detailed the life history of our late chief. However, you published the wrong demise date, this could be misleading to tourists and public. Therefore, I would suggest you make this correction and republish the article.

Igwe Osita, passed away in October 2012 not in October 2015. These dates are mixed up because it is custom that his death must not be announced until after three. Which is the date you published.

My hometown has proved to be a top choice for tourists, hence, is paramount not to mislead them with inaccurate information or date. It is also good to keep history as accurate as possible.

As a result, I would recommend you make the necessary correction and publish the updated article post haste before the forthcoming new year festival.

Hoping for your kind consideration in this regard.

Yours faithfully,

Eby Eby.