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Band 5+: You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter correct the information in the article explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

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Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter just to inform you that your article published this morning contains some wrong information.

In fact, your magazine said that in my city, there are two beaches. This information is not true. Actually, there are three beaches, two of them are located in the north city and one in the west. Additionally, he said that the number of population in this area is about 50.000 people. This is the number of population for 10 years. Currently, there are around 83.000 people in this area.

Because your magazine is very well-known and a lot of people read it, I think that you should verify your information before publishing. It is possible to loose your readers if there are a lot of incorrect information.

I suggest to publish another article as soon as possible and correct the wrong information and apologize about them.

Kind regards,

Marcelle

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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information: 3

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Task Response

The letter effectively addresses the task by identifying the incorrect information, explaining its importance, and suggesting a course of action. The letter is well-structured and easy to follow.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter is generally coherent, but there are some minor issues with sentence structure and flow that make it slightly difficult to follow at times.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, but there are a few instances where more precise or sophisticated language could be used.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

The letter contains some grammatical errors, particularly in sentence structure and verb tenses, which affect the overall clarity and fluency.

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