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Band 4+: You have seen an advertisement for part-time work in a hotel for three months over the summer. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter Say what experience you have Ask what the work involves Enquire about conditions

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Dear Sir or Madam

The reason why I am writing this letter to you to express my working experience in a busy hotel environment as well as ask the some cases

My name is Peter and I have graduated management in higher education and I have some practical experience in hotel . And also I can speak foreign languages and I can deal with foreign tourists.

So I am going to ask work prospects in your hotel . I want to know what types of work to do . And I really interested in my duties.

And also I want to know about work fees as well as apartment which hotel staff can stay .

I put my CV about my last work information. I look forward to hearing your response.

Yours faithfully.

Peter Tomson

Word Count: 135

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

hotel: 4

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Task Response

The letter addresses the task well, but it lacks clarity and organization. The letter could be more concise and focused. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter is difficult to follow due to grammatical errors and unclear sentence structure. The ideas are not presented in a logical order.

Lexical Resource

The letter uses a range of vocabulary, but some words are used incorrectly or in an unnatural way. The vocabulary is not always precise or sophisticated.

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The letter contains numerous grammatical errors, which significantly affect the clarity and fluency of the writing. The sentence structure is often incorrect or awkward.

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