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Band 4+: You have seen an advertisement for part-time work in a hotel for three months over the summer. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter Say what experience you have Ask what the work involves Enquire about conditions

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Dear Sir or Madam,

The reason of why I am writing to you to apply for part-time job which advertised in local newspapers.

As you know, I desire to work in your hotel for three months over the summer. I will enjoyful from working in your hotel. Therefore, I have certificates of foreign language native. In addition, I can speak with people perfectly.As a result, your visitors will be grateful from it. Again, I gained professional experiences a lot. I wrote about it in my personal website which you follow me on social media under the site.

To cut it short, I want to get some information about your hotel and work of employers and job position which you looked for and advertised and in newspapers and social media.

To sum up, I will be grateful if you accept my apply for this part-time job and you will not lose staff as like me.I do believe you never regret from your new decision.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Best regards,

Miss Raya

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

which: 3

hotel: 3

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Task Response

The letter partially addresses the task by mentioning the desire to apply for the part-time job, stating some experience, asking about the work involved, and inquiring about conditions. However, the response lacks specific details about the experience and does not clearly ask about the job responsibilities and conditions.

Coherence & Cohesion

3.5

The letter is somewhat coherent but lacks cohesion. There are some abrupt shifts between ideas, and the overall organization could be improved. Additionally, the use of language and transitions could be more refined to enhance the flow of the letter.

Lexical Resource

There is an attempt to use a range of vocabulary, but some words are not used accurately or appropriately. The letter would benefit from more precise and varied vocabulary to convey the message effectively. Additionally, there are errors in word choice and awkward phrasing that affect the overall lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

While there is an attempt to use a variety of sentence structures, there are several grammatical errors throughout the letter. Issues with verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and sentence construction impact the overall accuracy. Punctuation errors also detract from the clarity of the writing.

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