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Band 5+: You have seen an advertisement in a newspaper for a job in the city post office during your holidays. You decide to apply for the job. Write a letter to the director of the post office. In your letter, introduce yourself explain what experience and special skills you have explain why you are interested in the job

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Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter in response to the job offer at city post office in yesterday’s Times of India Newspaper for the post of front office executive. Hence, I would like to apply for the same.

I am Himani, third year student of Computer academics in New York University, As summer is going to start and your requirement also matches with my holidays. I am really like to start with you.

Last spring I had worked with Delta Couriers as a front office manager for 3 months. Even I also have computer knowledge and I can master data entries very easily. I am complete fit for the same position as I have its entire knowledge. I am highly skilled for such desk work. Moreover, my past experience also helps for this.

Thus, I fascinate to go through with it soon. As I like to explore new learnings and new culture. It will be a great opportunity to learn some thing new.

I look forward to your positive reply soon.

Thank you.

Yours faithfully,

Himani Parekh

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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office: 3

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Task Response

5.5

The letter addresses the task by introducing the writer, explaining their experience and skills, and stating their interest in the job. However, there is room for improvement in providing more specific details about the experience and skills relevant to the job at the post office.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is mostly coherent and cohesive, with ideas presented logically. However, there are some minor issues with paragraphing and the flow of information could be improved for better clarity.

Lexical Resource

There is a good range of vocabulary used, but some words and phrases could be more precise and natural. Additionally, more sophisticated vocabulary could enhance the overall quality of the letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter demonstrates a reasonable range of grammatical structures, but there are some errors in punctuation and sentence structure that affect the overall accuracy. Proofreading for such errors is recommended.

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