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Band 5+: You recently booked a part-time course at a college. You now need to cancel your booking. Write a letter to the college adminisllator. In your letter • say which part-time course you booked • explain why you need to cancel your booking • ask about booking a different course Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am a first year student of CSE department in your college. Yesterday, i have booked a part-time course named IT Analysis. But now i want to cancel this booking.

Let me explain my situation why i want to cancel this booking. I thought it would be helpful for my studies to get extra knowledge about IT and technology. But my interested topics are not available in the syllabus of this course.

I have joined this course by using my savings which i saved from my pocket money. If i can’t cancel this booking, i can’t join my interested course and i have to wait next 6 month for arranging the money.

I find another course in our college website named Advanced Networking. I would like to join this course by canceling my current joined course. Please help me by switching my current booking of course with other course which i mentioned.

You faithfully,

Tim

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

course: 8

cancel: 3

booking: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. The reason for cancellation and the request for an alternative course are clearly stated.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter's message is mostly clear, but the flow could be improved with better paragraphing and sentence structure. Some points feel a bit disjointed.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the context, but there's room to incorporate more sophisticated language and varied expressions.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammar errors and inaccuracies detract from the overall clarity and fluency. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for enhancing the overall quality.

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