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Band 6+: You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you've done since the course suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

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Dear Sir,

I hope this message finds you well. I am writing to provide feedback on a short cookery course I recently completed at your school.

As far as my interest in cooking is concerned that I had a wish from childhood to be a chef. Although my mother has given me training at home, I took admission in cookery school. Throughout my experince I have learnt so many things about cookery. For instance; knowledge of ingredients, presentation, recipes of continental and sub continental dishes. Experts play pivotal role in our learning. Moreover, the environment was very friendly, supportive, full of knowledge, and facilities. In addition, the supportive and friendly environment made my experience more enjoyable.

Actually the school has more than twenty highly educated teachers who were enthusiastic to share their expertise and knowledge with learners in a friendly manner. I have learnt Chinese, Turkish and Pakistani tradition cuisines. I have tried all dishes at home and my family enjoyed delicious food. They impressed with my skills which shows how effective the course is. All participants became experts in cuisines. The time duration of course was only two months which was not ample to learn all. I would love to take another cookery course from the school. I would request you to arrange another three months cooking course on all cuisines.

Thank you for your time and consideration

Looking forward to hear prompt response.

Yours sincerely,

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

course: 5

cookery: 4

school: 3

knowledge: 3

friendly: 3

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Task Response

The letter adequately covers the requirements of the task, describing what was enjoyed about the course, the amount of cooking done since, and a suggestion for another course. There are some minor areas for improvement. The letter could be more concise and focused on the specific points requested in the task. For example, the second paragraph could be streamlined to directly address what you enjoyed most. Also, while the letter mentions cooking at home, elaborating slightly more on the frequency or specific dishes you've made since the course would strengthen this point.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally coherent, but some sentences could be linked more smoothly to improve the flow. Consider using a wider range of cohesive devices to connect ideas between sentences and paragraphs. For example, in the second paragraph, the transition between discussing the learning experience and the friendly environment could be smoother. Also, ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single main idea to enhance clarity.

Lexical Resource

The letter demonstrates an adequate range of vocabulary, but there are opportunities to use more precise and varied language. For instance, instead of repeatedly using 'friendly' and 'supportive,' explore synonyms that convey the nuances of the environment. Additionally, consider incorporating more specific culinary terms to showcase your understanding of the cookery course content.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter exhibits a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but grammatical errors are noticeable and impact clarity. Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and article usage. For example, 'Throughout my experince I have learnt so many things about cookery' contains a misspelling and could be rephrased for better grammatical accuracy. Proofreading carefully before submission can help identify and correct these errors.

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