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Band 7+: You recently stayed at a hotel and encountered some problems during your stay. Write a letter to the hotel manager outlining the issues you experienced, explaining their impact on your stay, and suggesting possible solutions."

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I hereby write this letter to clarify the problem I faced during my stay at your hotel.

After booking my work trip at your hotel, I emailed the 24/7 service politely asking if a room with a bath was available. I instantly received a positive reply, but upon arrival, the bathroom lacked a bath.

My bath time is necessary for relaxing after work, especially when traveling. I could not sleep well because of this problem, and it was important for me to be alert the following day.

After my stay, and considering my treatment by the hotel staff, I suggest improving internal organization and communication to prevent similar mistakes.

Looking forward to your reply, I wish you a good week. Mirko Alessandrini.

Word Count: 126

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. The issues are clearly outlined, their impact explained, and solutions suggested. However, more detail could enhance the response. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

6.5

The letter is easy to follow, with a logical flow of information. Paragraphing is clear. Improved cohesion could be achieved through more sophisticated linking words and phrases.

Lexical Resource

6.5

The vocabulary used is appropriate and accurate, but a wider range of vocabulary and more precise word choices would elevate the letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

8.5

The grammar is accurate and error-free. A wider range of grammatical structures could be incorporated to achieve a higher score.

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Band 7+: You recently stayed at a hotel and encountered some problems during your stay. Write a letter to the hotel manager outlining the issues you experienced, explaining their impact on your stay, and suggesting possible solutions."

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