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Band 5+: You recently took a tour organized by a local travel company. Unfortunately, you were very disappointed with the experience. Write a letter to the travel company manager. In your letter: - Explain what tour you took and when. - Describe what aspects of the tour were unsatisfactory. - Suggest what the company can do to improve their tours.

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Dear guide,

I am grateful to receive your message regarding my feelings and for any ideas to improve your camping trip.

What I really loved about your camping is that it is located on the mountain. That is, it has more attractive views and relaxing places. The camp is very comfortable and equipped with more furniture. The food was excellent and tasty because it makes fresh products and is being prepared on the fire. Also there are different team games which people enjoy.

In addition, guide were not only polite with good attitudes but also they tells different story’s for scar and enjoying visitors.

It would be great if you made bigger pool with rink because there small pool and not rink. Also it would be better if you bought there more team activities because team games there are not more.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

there: 4

because: 3

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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses the task by expressing feelings about the camping trip and suggesting improvements. The positive aspects are clearly outlined, and suggestions for improvement are provided. To improve, ensure that suggestions are more specific and detailed, and that the tone remains consistently polite and constructive throughout the letter. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization is somewhat clear, but the flow of ideas could be improved. Consider using more transitional phrases to connect your thoughts and create a smoother reading experience. For example, when transitioning from positive aspects to suggestions for improvement, a phrase like 'However, there are a few areas that could be enhanced' would be beneficial. Also, ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main idea to enhance clarity.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate for conveying the main points, but it lacks sophistication and variety. To improve, try to incorporate more descriptive words and phrases to make your writing more engaging. For instance, instead of saying 'attractive views,' you could describe the views as 'breathtaking panoramic vistas.' Also, be mindful of word choice to ensure it accurately reflects your intended meaning.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and proper sentence structure. For example, 'guide were not only polite' should be 'guides were not only polite' or 'the guides were not only polite.' Also, review the use of articles (a, an, the) and prepositions to ensure accuracy. Consistent proofreading is essential to catch and correct these errors.

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