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Band 4+: You recently visited a local restaurant. The service and food were poor. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. Include: What happened Why you were unhappy What you want them to do

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Dear sir and madam,

I am writting to let’s you know that I was a food poisoning after I visited the restaurant on December 3rd , by that time I ordered chicken tomyum.

On december 3rd I had start first meal in your restaurant after that I have stomach aches a lot, despite of I have to go to see the doctor. Because of my symtoms that took me stay in hospital and doctors said that because of chicken still bit raw and chicken have to eat in welldone level so that why I had a food poisoning.

Addition to my symtoms I would like you to respond to my payment from hospital and chicken tomyum.

It would be nice if you send the check to my bank account name jenifer. Further I would like you to recheck process of making food before send them to customer.

Best gard,

Jenifer

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

chicken: 4

would: 3

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Task Response

The letter attempts to address the task but includes irrelevant information (hospital stay) and lacks clarity in explaining the expected resolution. The tone is also somewhat demanding rather than polite. To improve, focus on clearly stating the specific issues with the service, providing relevant details, and suggesting a reasonable solution in a more courteous manner.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization is somewhat unclear, and the progression of ideas is difficult to follow. Paragraphing is present but not effectively used to separate distinct points. Consider structuring your letter with a clear introduction stating the purpose, followed by paragraphs detailing the incident, the problems encountered, and the desired resolution. Using cohesive devices (e.g., 'furthermore,' 'in addition,' 'therefore') can help link ideas and improve the flow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and lacks precision. There are instances of inappropriate word choice (e.g., 'writting,' 'start first meal'). To improve, try to use more specific and varied vocabulary related to the context of complaining about a restaurant experience. For example, instead of 'stomach aches a lot,' you could say 'severe stomach cramps.' Focus on using synonyms and more descriptive language to convey your message effectively.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains frequent grammatical errors that impede understanding. Errors include incorrect verb tenses ('I was a food poisoning,' 'I have start'), subject-verb agreement issues, and incorrect preposition usage. Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. To improve, focus on mastering basic grammar rules, particularly verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and correct article usage. Practice constructing simple and compound sentences accurately before attempting more complex structures. Proofread carefully for errors.

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