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Band 5+: You saw a brochure for a one-week walking tour in the mountains. You're very interested in taking part, but you're not very fit and are worried you wouldn't be able to keep up. Write to the tour operator. In your letter: • Explain why you're interested in the tour. • Ask for information about dates and prices. • Express your concerns about your fitness level.

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Dear Mr. Sofyan Patanda Sayutir,

I am writing this letter to inform you that, lately I always goes to the mountains with my friends for a one week and I saw some brochures on the stone. Actually, I am very tired because I have to walk so far like three hours, and also I am not very fit and worried I would not be able to keep up.

On the one hand, during the course of tour I come by the stone and I saw a brochure that makes me interest. Well, in the brochure I saw a lot of color at there and so many pictures.

Moreover, after I saw your brochure I can not see about when and where the competition to be held. I want to make sure about dates and prices. Well, I want to know more information about this brochure.

Therefore, I actually concerns about my fitness level because of walking for one week tour in the mountains might I can prepare my self to being healthy. I hope, I can participate in your competition. Do not hesitate to contact me if you need further information.

Kind Regards,

Renaldi Sofyan

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

about: 4

brochure: 3

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Task Response

6

The letter adequately addresses the task, but could be more concise and focused.

Coherence & Cohesion

5

The letter lacks a clear structure and flow. Some sentences are grammatically incorrect, making it difficult to follow the message.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The letter uses a range of vocabulary, but some choices are not always accurate or appropriate.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

The letter contains several grammatical errors, which affect the overall clarity and fluency.

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