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Band 5+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are a member of an International Students' club. The club is organising an event to celebrate popular food from around the world. Write a letter to the event organizer, Luis. In your letter • offer to make a popular dish from your country • describe what this dish is • explain why it should be included in the event Begin your letter as follows: Dear Luis,

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Dear Luis,

I hope you are doing great. As you know that I am the member of international students club and I came to know, you are organizing an even related to popular food from whole world. However, I request you to include the popular dish from my home country.

The well unknown dish of my country is biryani. which is famous in all over the world and 50% of population is keen to eat it. Moreover, biryani is health dish which is cooked with rice, chicken and variety of vegetables

I would be great and proud moment for me, to see my traditional food in internationally and I know the other member’s love to eat spicy food. It would be appreciated If you could consider my request and serve the biryani. I am sure, there will be the positive response.

I am looking forward to your response

Kind regards,

Parshant

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

biryani: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The letter successfully addresses all parts of the task. The dish is described, and a justification for its inclusion is provided. However, the response could be more detailed and persuasive.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is mostly clear, but the flow could be improved with better sentence structure and paragraphing. The numerous grammatical errors impact the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is adequate but lacks range and sophistication. More precise and varied language would enhance the letter's impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that affect clarity and fluency. Improved grammatical accuracy is needed to achieve a higher score.

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