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Band 5+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You want to join a new gym in your neighbourhood. Write a letter to the gym manager. In your letter * ask what types of membership are available, and what the prices are * ask what activities are available * ask what the joining procedure is You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

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Dear sir or madam,

I am Gurpreet Kaur. I am living in your neighbour hood. I am writing this letter to asking about your gym membership.

First and foremost, how many kinds of membership available in your gym. What is the price of each of them? I am working in the hospital so my working hours fluctuating every week. So I need to know about the timing what time your is open and close and how many day you are open a week.

Apartfrom this . I want to know about the activities are provided by your gymnasium. One of my friend told me you are providing personal trainers if somebody wants to hire.

In last , please let me know the admission procedure ,is it online or I need to come for registration.

I hope will get your response soon

Yours faithfully,

Gurpreet Kaur

Word Count: 145

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

about: 3

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Task Response

The letter appropriately addresses all requirements of the task, with relevant and sufficient information provided. There are a few minor grammatical errors, but they do not significantly impede understanding. To improve, focus on refining sentence structure and ensuring accurate grammar throughout the letter. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization is somewhat clear, but the flow of ideas could be improved. Consider using more transitional phrases to connect your questions and requests smoothly. Paragraphing is present but could be more effective in grouping related ideas. For example, the questions about membership types and prices could be grouped together in one paragraph, and the questions about gym timings and activities in another.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is generally adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in using more precise and varied language. For instance, instead of repeatedly using 'know about,' try alternatives like 'inquire about' or 'understand.' Also, consider using more specific vocabulary related to gym activities and membership options.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Pay close attention to verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and correct article usage. For example, 'asking about your gym membership' should be 'to ask about your gym membership,' and 'how many kinds of membership available' should be 'how many kinds of memberships are available.' Proofreading carefully for these types of errors will significantly improve your writing.

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