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Band 6+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You want to join a new gym in your neighbourhood. Write a letter to the gym manager. In your letter * ask what types of membership are available, and what the prices are * ask what activities are available * ask what the joining procedure is You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

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Dear Sir,

I was willing to join your gym as I live near the place where your fitness club is located. I wanted some information regarding the gym membership. I would glad to know that what are the types of gym memberships that are available at your gym? Moreover I also want to know the cost for each membership, so that I can join easily.

Furthermore, I am interested to know about the activities that are available at the gym. As you have a very proffesional setup of different equipments so I was really willing to know about the activities that are currently available.

I have some question regarding joining procedure. I wanted to know that, what is this procedure of joining your gym? By which I can get register and start my workout journey with you.I would be very thankful to you if you answer my queries.

I am looking forward to your response.

Best regards,

Muhammad Sarosh

Word Count: 159

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter appropriately covers all requirements of the task, asking about membership types and prices, available activities, and the joining procedure. There are a few minor grammatical errors, but they do not detract from the overall message. To improve, pay closer attention to grammatical accuracy and sentence structure.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally organized, but the flow could be improved with better transitions between ideas. Consider using more varied cohesive devices to link sentences and paragraphs more smoothly. For example, in the second paragraph, you could directly link your interest in activities to your proximity to the gym. Also, ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main point to enhance clarity.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there's room to enhance it with more specific and varied word choices. For instance, instead of 'proffesional setup of different equipments,' you could describe the equipment more precisely (e.g., 'state-of-the-art cardiovascular and strength training equipment'). Using synonyms and a wider range of vocabulary will make your writing more engaging and demonstrate a better command of the language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. For example, 'I would glad to know' should be 'I would be glad to know,' and 'what is this procedure of joining your gym?' could be phrased as 'what is the procedure for joining your gym?' or 'could you please outline the joining procedure?' Pay close attention to verb tenses, prepositions, and sentence structure to improve accuracy. Proofreading carefully before submitting can help catch these errors.

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