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Band 7+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A good friend has just changed schools and is having difficulty fitting in and needs your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • make suggestions as to how they could make friends • suggest joining clubs, participating in school activities • give any extra general advice

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Dear Ram

I hope you are doing well. I got to know that you have switched to Australia public school in Sydney and finding it difficult to amalgamate with new children and teachers there. Don’t worry, I will help you out in this matter.

I suggest you to request teacher to break the ice between you and other children there by a small introduction about you and your background. Additionally, You should take part in extra curricular activities like debates and dancing which will foster your social cohesion with new students and staff. Moreover, you can join the famous cricket club in that school which will increase your engagement with like-minded peers.

Also, please be courteous and chivalrous to each person you meet there. In case any bad elements try to harass you, please don’t entangle with them and report it to your teacher.

I wish you get infused with the students and teachers there soon and make some amazing friends for life.

Yours Faithfully,

Vineet Arneja

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Overall Band Score

7.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

there: 4

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Task Response

The letter effectively addresses the task by providing relevant advice and suggestions. It covers all the points mentioned in the task, including making friends, joining clubs, participating in activities, and offering general advice.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally well-organized and easy to follow. However, there are a few minor grammatical errors that slightly affect the flow of the message.

Lexical Resource

7.5

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary and uses it accurately and appropriately. There are some instances of slightly less formal language, but overall, the vocabulary is impressive.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

6.5

The letter shows a good command of grammar, but there are a few minor errors that affect the overall accuracy. The use of punctuation could be improved in some places.

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