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Band 5+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A good friend has just changed schools and is having difficulty fitting in and needs your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • make suggestions as to how they could make friends • suggest joining clubs, participating in school activities • give any extra general advice

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Dear Vihaan,

Hopes this letter finds you well in health and spirits. I find that you need some of my advise, as of you are finding hard to make your new buddys over there. I am going to share some ideas and some suggesation of mine personal experiances.

Firstly you can start making your first friends from your bench. You can start to talk with your benchpartner. You can share, How you are in your old school, such as what you like, what is your most intrested subject in study and etc.

Also, there are so many activities going on outside of your class. You can also take part in cricket sports team, just because i know how excellent you are in batting. However, there are many clubs in your school you can also join one of that club, which you find best suetable for you.

The most importantly, Nowadays there are few students who directed towards some attractive negative activities. Where they do some very dangerous things, which will impact in a negative way for their health and body.

Hopes this tips gives you a best motivation and ideas to make some best friends.

Your Faithfully

Rushil

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Overall Band Score

5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

there: 4

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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. The advice is relevant and helpful, although it could be more detailed and nuanced.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter's message is mostly understandable, but the numerous grammatical errors and awkward phrasing disrupt the flow and make it difficult to follow at times. Improved sentence structure and clearer transitions would significantly enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

5

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the task, but the range is limited, and there is some imprecise word choice. A wider range of vocabulary and more precise language would improve the overall quality.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that affect the clarity and overall understanding. Significant improvement in grammar and punctuation is needed to achieve a higher score.

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