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Band 4+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your friend is about to celebrate a landmark birthday and would welcome suggestions as to how it should be celebrated. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say what type of party should be held e.g. themed, fancy dress, black tie event • suggest a suitable venue • make recommendations as to entertainment e.g. DJ, jazz band You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear..., You should write at least 150 words.

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I hope you are doing well. I am writing to share some suggestions with you about celebration of your landmark birthday.

My dear friend you know very well, I always found of to organize parties and would love to share some important suggestions with you about your celebration. There are some important factors you have to keep in your mind such as theme, dressing and black tie.

As you know that, there are few five star hotels offers special discount in this month and I want to advise you to avail this offer. I have some options in my mind to choose venue such as Ramada Plazza, PC hotel and Kolachi. We could have special discount for the big parties and after counting guest list, I believe that, this is the best option we have to select for the birthday celebration.

I want to recommend a one of the famous DJ in town. I am sure DJ will entertain very our guest and make amazing charmp in our event.

Yours faithfully,

Joel Peter

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. More detail and development in suggestions would improve the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's structure is understandable, but the flow is disrupted by grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Improved sentence structure and clearer transitions would enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is appropriate, but lacks range and sophistication. A wider vocabulary and more precise word choices would improve the lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

Grammatical errors are frequent and impact the overall clarity and fluency. Improved grammatical accuracy is needed to achieve a higher score.

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