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Band 5+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart below shows numbers of seals, wheals and dolphins recorded in the Gormez Straits from 2006 to 2018 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image illustrates species counts in Gomez Straits from 2006-2018. In 2006: Seals 40, Whales 20, Dolphins 30. In 2010: Seals 35, Whales 22, Dolphins 28. In 2014: Seals 40, Whales 23, Dolphins 27, and in 2018: Seals 47, Whales 20, Dolphins 48.

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The bar chart displays count of seals, whales and dolphins recorded in the Gormez Straits between 2006 and 2018.

Overall, the numbers of dolphins were stable increased all that time, started by approximately 18 in 2006 achieved just over 50 in 2018, count of seals and whales were fluctuated in that part of time.

In 2006 the numbers of dolphins had the least rate compare with others and were at level about 18, but the next 4 years achieved a level just over 20, another next 4 years achieved almost 33, and in the period of time between 2014 and 2018 achieved maximum level just over 50, and this rate was the highest than another two’s.

In 2006 count of seals and whales were higher than count of dolphins, numbers of seals were higher than others in this time, were at level about 42. In 2010 number of seals and whales were at the same level. In 2014 numbers of seals started increasing back. Count of whales were just over 20. In the period of time between 2014 and 2018 numbers of both seals and whales were increased.

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seals: 7

whales: 6

count: 5

numbers: 5

level: 5

dolphins: 4

achieved: 4

between: 3

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The report generally addresses the task but contains some inaccuracies and a lack of specific data. The description of the dolphin numbers is not entirely accurate, and the report could benefit from more precise data points to support the overall trends. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data and providing specific figures to enhance clarity and credibility.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report's organization is somewhat unclear, and the transitions between ideas could be smoother. The overall structure needs improvement to enhance readability. For example, the overall trends should be clearly stated in the introduction or immediately after it, and each paragraph should focus on a specific aspect of the data. Consider using more cohesive devices to link sentences and paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive. There is a lack of precision in describing the data. For example, instead of saying 'achieved a level just over 20,' you could use more specific terms like 'increased to 22.' To improve, try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to trends and comparisons, such as 'peaked,' 'remained constant,' 'fluctuated,' 'surpassed,' etc. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors that affect clarity. Sentence structure is often awkward, and there are issues with subject-verb agreement, tense usage, and article usage. For example, 'numbers of dolphins were stable increased' is grammatically incorrect. To improve, focus on constructing grammatically correct sentences and proofread carefully for errors. Pay attention to verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and correct use of articles and prepositions.

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