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Band 5+: You successfully passed a job interview. You are expected to start on November 15, but you will not be available on that date. Task: Write a letter yo your new boss, explaining your situation, expressing your concern and suggesting a solution.

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Dear Boss,

I hope you are having a good day. I am writing this email regarding to the starting date of job that I recently interviewed for.

As per our conversation, I was supposed to start my work from November 15 but due to my unwellness I am unble to start on that day. I would like to state my apology for the inconvinance that this may result to you.

I would like to let you know that I can start after I recover from the the flu that I just get 3 days before and I am taking medication and good care of myself so that I can start as soon as possible. I hope you understand my situation. Thank you so much for your consideration.

faithfully,

Muna Shakya

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

start: 4

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Task Response

The letter successfully addresses all parts of the task. However, the suggested solution could be more specific and professional. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter's message is mostly clear, but the flow could be improved with better transitions and paragraphing. Some grammatical errors affect the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate but lacks range and sophistication. More precise and professional language would improve the letter's impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity and fluency. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for a higher score.

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Band 5+: You successfully passed a job interview. You are expected to start on November 15, but you will not be available on that date. Task: Write a letter yo your new boss, explaining your situation, expressing your concern and suggesting a solution.

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You successfully passed a job interview. You are expected to start on November 15, but you will not be available on that date. Task: Write a letter yo your new boss, explaining your situation, expressing your concern and suggesting a solution.

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