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Band 6+: You successfully passed a job interview. You are expected to start on November 15, but you will not be available on that date. Task: Write a letter yo your new boss, explaining your situation, expressing your concern and suggesting a solution.

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am glad that I have secured a part-time tutor position in your coaching classes. I am very exited to start my new career with such a popular Industry.

I am supposed to joint from November 15, however, I have my US visitor visa appointment on the same day, as it is in Ottawa, I have pre-booked my plain tickets and have planned my journey. I am afraid that if I reschedule or cancel the appointment I will loose opportunity to travel to the United States.

However, I can start from the very next day which is November 16. I am making sure that I will return by 15 November as soon as I finish my interview. I would appreciate your help with this unpredicted Situation.

Heartfully, awaiting for a positive response from you.

Thank You,

Yours Faithfully,

Maruf

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

november: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The letter successfully addresses all aspects of the task. The explanation is clear, the concern is expressed, and a solution is suggested. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter is generally well-organized, but there are some minor issues with sentence structure and flow that could be improved.

Lexical Resource

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, but there are a few instances where more precise or formal language could be used.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are a few grammatical errors that affect the overall clarity and fluency of the letter.

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Band 6+: You successfully passed a job interview. You are expected to start on November 15, but you will not be available on that date. Task: Write a letter yo your new boss, explaining your situation, expressing your concern and suggesting a solution.

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You successfully passed a job interview. You are expected to start on November 15, but you will not be available on that date. Task: Write a letter yo your new boss, explaining your situation, expressing your concern and suggesting a solution.

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