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Band 5+: You took an elderly member of your family,who was not able to walk properly, to a museum and he/she faced few problems. Write a letter to the manager of the museum. ●say why you visited the museum ● describe the problems you faced ● suggest what can be done to avoid those problems.

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Dear Sir/ Madam,

I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction regarding the visit to the museum. I visited the place on previous Saturday with my aunt who is aged above 60. She is person who is experiencing from severe stress. Due to this I planned to accompany her to the museum for the purpose of alleviating from her personal problems and the feeling of loneliness. Moreover, I booked two tickets for two adults with the provision of wheel entry to the area.

Unfortunately, the volunteers did not give the permission for using wheel chair in few areas and they claimed those areas are only wheel chair free. As person who is physically weak it is the right of the person to use the supporting equipment for their walk.

I was very disappointed with the behaviour of the staffs and to the inaccessibility of the basic provisions in the public places.

I would like to suggest that the ramps can be built for the entry of wheel chairs to every centre of the museum to reduce the dissatisfaction among the visitors.

I hope you will take necessary arrangements to tackle this problem promptly.

Yours faithfully,

Sera John.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

wheel: 4

museum: 3

person: 3

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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses the task by explaining the visit, describing the problems faced, and suggesting solutions. There are some minor areas for improvement, such as elaborating further on the specific areas where wheelchair access was denied and providing more detailed suggestions for improvements beyond just ramps. Overall, the letter is well-organized and clearly conveys the writer's message.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally coherent, but the organization could be improved for better flow. Consider grouping your points more logically, perhaps dedicating a paragraph to each main point (reason for visit, problems faced, suggestions). The transition between the description of the problem and the suggested solutions could be smoother. Using more varied cohesive devices would also enhance the overall readability.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in terms of precision and variety. For instance, instead of 'experiencing from severe stress,' you could use 'suffering from significant stress' or 'dealing with considerable anxiety.' Try to incorporate more specific and descriptive language to make your writing more engaging and impactful. For example, instead of 'wheel chair free' you could say 'areas not accessible by wheelchair'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. For example, 'She is person who is experiencing from severe stress' should be 'She is a person who is experiencing severe stress' or 'She suffers from severe stress.' Pay close attention to article usage (a/an/the), preposition choice, and subject-verb agreement. Proofreading carefully for these common errors will significantly improve your grammatical accuracy. Also, avoid overly complex sentence structures when simpler ones would convey your message more clearly.

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Band 5+: You took an elderly member of your family,who was not able to walk properly, to a museum and he/she faced few problems. Write a letter to the manager of the museum. ●say why you visited the museum ● describe the problems you faced ● suggest what can be done to avoid those problems.

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