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Band 4+: You want to learn a language. There is a teacher near to where you live. Write a letter to the teacher. In the letter: say how you came to know about him/her explain why you want to learn ask what help they can offer.

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Dear Mrs Muqumuva

Mt name is Bekzod and I am writing to enquire about English language lessons, especially CEFR preparing classes.

I have read about your language courses in the Telegram channel group and after reading the reviews I am absolutely sure that your knowledge and experience will help me to pass the exam. I would like to know about the availability of fast track courses because I booked for the exam on the 11th of May.

It would be interesting to know how the classes are going. It would be grateful if you could tell me what the price is and how long could be the lessons.I study at school number 46 and i am so busy now.

I look forward to receiving your reply.

Yours sincerely

Bekzod

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

about: 3

would: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses the task by introducing how the student learned about the teacher, explaining the reason for wanting to learn, and asking about the help offered. However, there are some minor deviations from the task, such as not explicitly asking about the help the teacher can offer for the upcoming exam. To improve, ensure all aspects of the task are covered explicitly. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is somewhat coherent and cohesive, but there are some issues that affect the overall flow. The organization of ideas could be improved by separating the inquiries into distinct paragraphs. Additionally, there are some abrupt transitions between sentences. Try to link ideas more smoothly for better coherence.

Lexical Resource

There is a decent range of vocabulary used, and some terms related to language learning are included. However, there are instances of awkward phrasing and inaccuracies that slightly impact the lexical resource score. Try to use more varied and precise vocabulary to enhance the overall quality of the letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but there are noticeable grammatical errors throughout. Issues with verb tense consistency, subject-verb agreement, and punctuation affect the clarity of the message. Proofreading for grammatical accuracy is essential to improve the score in this criterion.

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