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Band 5+: You want to rent out a small apartment to a family, and you have decided to advertise it. Write a letter to the editor of a local newspaper asking to advertise your ad on the front page of the newspaper. In your letter, 1. give details of the ad that you want to publish 2. mention that you want the ad to be published on the front page say 3. how you would like to pay for the advertisement Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir/Madam,

I am Pooja Shah, living at Arvona Place in Mississauga. I came to know about your local but well known newspaper in our city. I am writing this letter to enquire about advertising.

Currently I have one spare small, well furnished apartment which I want to rent out. The flat consist of two bedrooms with attached bathroom, a kitchen and a living room. Moreover, the apartment is located in a convenient and safe neighborhood. I would like to rent the apartment to a small family member of four.

I kindly request that the ad be placed on the front page with some pictures and my contact details which I am attaching with this letter. Also, I would like to discuss about payment, I have to pay some advance or not and through which method I have to pay.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Your sincerely,

Pooja Shah

Word Count: 150

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

about: 3

apartment: 3

which: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The letter effectively addresses the task by providing details of the ad, requesting front-page placement, and mentioning payment options. However, it could be improved by being more concise and direct in its request.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally coherent, but the flow could be smoother. Some sentences are a bit long and could be broken down for better clarity.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The letter uses a good range of vocabulary, but some phrases could be more precise and impactful.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

The letter contains some grammatical errors that affect the overall clarity and flow. The use of punctuation and sentence structure could be improved.

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