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Band 5+: Your child is going on a three day school trip to another country. The head teacher wants to find parents to go with the group and you would like to go. Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter: Say why you would like to go on the trip Suggest what you could do to help during the trip Ask other questions about the trip

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Dear Teacher,

First of all I really like to appreciate you for organising such a wonderful tour for the children.

I have received the letter from you explaining the details of the trip and also got to know that you are looking for parent volunteers to join. I would like to put myself as a candidate to join the group. Sri Lanka is a very nice destination and there are a lot of cultural and historical things for young generation to learn. I would be a great addition to the team, not only because I had explored Sri Lanka four times, but also I can read, write and speak both Tamil and Sinhalese languages. Apart from all these I love being with young ones.

I have gone through the Itinerary, there are a couple of doubts regarding the accommodation facilities organised in Columbo and Jaffna. Do they provide free transport services from the airport? Do they have any special play area for children?

looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours Faithfully,

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter addresses the main points of the task by stating the desire to join the trip, offering to help, and asking questions about the trip. However, it could be more specific in detailing how the writer can contribute during the trip.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter is mostly coherent and cohesive, with ideas presented in a logical order. However, there are some minor issues with paragraphing and the flow of information could be improved for better clarity.

Lexical Resource

5.5

There is a good range of vocabulary used, and some attempts at sophistication. However, there are a few inaccuracies and awkward phrases that could be improved for a higher score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5.5

The letter demonstrates a variety of sentence structures, but there are some grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect the overall accuracy. Proofreading for these errors is recommended.

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