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Band 5+: Your English-speaking friend who lives in your town has asked for your advice about learning a new sport. Write an email to you friend. In your email: Recommend a new sport that would be suitable for your friend to learn Explain how your friend could learn this sport Suggest that you learn this sport together.

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Dear Pican,

I hope you are doing will. You asked me for advice about learning a new sport, and I would like to recommend praying football. I think football is a suitable sport for you because It is fun, healthy and you can have many friends. This sport aise helps increase fitness, speed and skill play.

Besides that, you can learn praying football by joining a local sports center or playing football with friends every evening can the football field. At the beginning, you can practice the basic skills such has how to kick the ball, foot movement and watch video football matches online also can help you improve you skills faster.

Finally, I would like to suggest that we learn this sport together. We can practic in the evening or weekend at nearby football field. Studying together will be more fun, give us this spirit of each other and can increase the Silence.

I hope you like this proposals I’ll wait for a reply from you.

Your’s Sincerely,

(Adrick Jamon)

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

football: 7

sport: 4

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Task Response

The letter addresses all parts of the task and provides relevant information. There are some language errors throughout the letter, but they do not significantly impede communication. To improve, focus on using more precise vocabulary and proofreading for grammatical accuracy.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally understandable, but the organization could be improved. Consider structuring your points more clearly within paragraphs, focusing on one main idea per paragraph. Transitions between ideas could also be smoother to enhance the flow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there's room to use more varied and precise language. For example, instead of 'fun' and 'healthy,' try to use more descriptive words that capture the specific benefits of playing football. Also, be mindful of word choice; 'praying football' is likely a typo and should be corrected.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors throughout the letter that affect clarity. Focus on improving sentence structure, subject-verb agreement, and correct use of articles and prepositions. Pay close attention to verb tenses and ensure they are consistent and appropriate. Proofreading carefully before submitting can help catch these errors.

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