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Band 7+: In many countries, women no longer feel the need to get married. Some people believe that this is because women are able to earn their own income and therefore do not require the financial security that marriage can bring. To what extent do you agree?

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In several countries, some people believe that women do not need to get married if they are able to earn, but others think otherwise. In my opinion, there is truth to both opinions. I will clarify both views and share my agreement.

First and foremost, some think that women do not need get married, due to their ability to earn own income, which shows a strong perspective of women, such as independence, self-improvement, and bravery. With these earnings, they can everything that they want and do not fret about money, house, car and so on. For instance, in Canada women do not get married, they can earn own money, live without men’s care, because of independence and democracy; they can do all by themselves.

Second of all, financial aspects do not encompass one’s whole life, and we cannot buy love with money. Some argue that relationships are more significant than finance, because you can continue your life with lover and can obtain more income together. For instance, couples who work together toward common goals often achieve more both emotionally and financially, than individuals who work alone.

Take the example of small business owners: many successful family-run businesses started with couples combining their resources and efforts. Moreover, in difficult times, a loving partner can offer comfort and help you cope with stress in ways that money cannot. While independence is valuable, meaningful relationships add depth, joy, and resilience to life that wealth alone often cannot provide.

On balance, since financial freedom and other reasons are used to consider the decision of whether to marry, it is difficult to draw conclusions on whether I agree or disagree.

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