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Band 5+: In many societies, there is growing emphasis on achieving high levels of academic success. Some people believe that this pressure on young people is detrimental to their well-being and overall development and that children should be allowed to focus more on non-academic talents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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In modern worlds some people believe that young peoples should be prepare for academic skills or talent . And other think it is not important for achieve high levels.So in this essay i will discuss both views of this statement.

Firstly,i think they should not for prepared only for high level of academic succes,because it is not significantly solving for the future.From my perspective,pressure on young people is detrimentalto their well-being ways.For instance,students may lose interest in hobbies or it can affect mental health,can cause stress and children need balance in life. High grades do not guarantee succes in life,and non-academic skills are also essential.And every child has different talents and abilities.Practicial experience can sometimes be more useful than academic knowledge.In addition,children need time to relax and enjoy their childhood,too much competition can reduce self-confidence.For example,hobbies such as spoetrs,misic and art help children become more creative and independent.

Secondly, academic skills are extremely important because they help young people build a successful future and provide them with more career opportunities. In today’s competitive world, good education is necessary for entering prestigious universities and finding stable, well-paid jobs. For example, students who achieve high academic results often have a greater chance of becoming doctors, lawyers or engineers. Moreover, academic learning helps children develop important qualities such as discipline, responsibility, time-management and critical thinking skills. These abilities are useful not only in education but also in everyday life and future careers. Therefore, academic success still plays a significant role in personal development and financial stability.

In conclusion,i agree that academic skills are important for future success, but too much pressure can be harmful for young people. Therefore, children should have a balance between studying and hobbies.

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