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Band 9: Some people believe that competition at educational institutions is beneficial for students, while others think it creates unnecessary pressure. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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People have gone back and forth on competition in schools for as long as anyone can remember. Depending on who you ask, it either builds character or quietly breaks kids down. Personally, I think the competition itself is rarely the issue – it is more about what schools are actually asking students to compete for.

The case for it is straightforward enough. Pressure, in measured doses, gets people moving. A student chasing a scholarship or fighting for limited seats in a programme learns something that a relaxed classroom rarely teaches – that effort has consequences. Life after graduation operates the same way. Hiring panels, performance reviews, promotions – none of these are handed out for showing up. Those who have already learned to function under scrutiny tend to land on their feet faster than those encountering it for the first time at 25.

That said, there is a version of school competition that genuinely does harm. When the entire culture revolves around outranking peers, something shifts. Kids go quiet. Not because they have nothing to ask, but because looking confused in front of classmates starts to carry a social cost. Trying something that might not work stops feeling worth it. And the ones who are really struggling rarely say so out loud – the environment makes that feel like an admission of defeat.

The fix is not removing competition but changing what students are competing against. Schools can do this practically – replacing class rankings with individual progress tracking, building assessments that reward improvement over a term rather than a single sitting, and training teachers to treat wrong answers as part of the process rather than evidence of failure. When a student’s measure of success shifts from beating classmates to beating their own previous performance, the motivation that follows is far more durable.

Competition, structured this way, stops being a source of anxiety and starts being a genuine preparation for adult life – which is ultimately what education is supposed to do.

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