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Band 8+: Some people believe that only the most outstanding students should be rewarded. Others, however, thinks that it is more important to reward students who show improvements. Discuss both both views and give your own opinion.

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The debate on whether schools should reward students with the best academic results or those who show improvements is an ongoing one. Both views have their own merits, and each approach offers distinct benefits to students.

On one hand, rewarding the top academic performers is seen as a way to encourage excellence and high standards. Students who achieve the best results demonstrate exceptional effort and intellectual ability, and rewarding them sets a benchmark for others to aspire to. This system can foster a sense of competition and motivate students to push their limits. Additionally, academic success is often linked to future opportunities, and recognizing top performers can prepare them for challenges in higher education or their careers.

On the other hand, some believe that rewarding improvements, rather than just the best results, is more important. This approach acknowledges the efforts of students who may not start with high academic potential but are making noticeable progress. Recognizing improvement motivates these students to continue working hard, as their efforts are valued, not just their end results. This system is particularly beneficial for students who may struggle with certain subjects, as it boosts their confidence and encourages a growth mindset. Rewarding improvement ensures that all students, regardless of their starting point, feel recognized and supported.

In my opinion, schools should focus on rewarding improvement. While academic excellence is important, it is essential to foster a supportive environment where every student feels motivated to grow. Recognizing improvement helps build self-esteem and encourages persistence, which is crucial for long-term success.

In conclusion, while rewarding top academic performers has its advantages, rewarding improvement fosters a more inclusive and encouraging learning environment.

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