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Band 5+: Some people think children should not use smartphones until they are at least 16 years old. Do you agree or disagree?

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Undoubtebly, more and more parents are giving smartphones to their children at very young age. It is thought that children should not be allowed to use a mobile phone until they become mature. I partially agree with this statement and both the views will be discussed in the upcoming paragraph before reaching to the logical conclusion.

To embark upon,there are various reasons to showcase the viewpoint.Fundamentaly,smartphone can have negitive empact on childrens life.First and foremost,The main cause is independence with devices’ effects on mental health. For instance, currently many minors and teenagers are suffering from psychological issues such as sleep problems or less physical activities. For these problems smartphones and electronic devices are caused. Additional argument that mobile phones become addicted to fall prey to the rabbit hole of social media. Social platforms such as “Tik tok”, “Instagram” and others are becoming addicted to short content and this issue leads to waste of time, less concentration to study or spend time with friends outside. To solve these problems parents should teach the pleasure of real life.

Therefore,mobile phones possess educational applications that can significantly enrich children’s learning experiences. While it is true that many young users may gravitate towards video games rather than educational content, parents can implement measures to guide and restrict access to certain applications. By curating a selection of appropriate educational tools, parents can foster an engaging environment conducive to learning. For example, a child with a keen interest in animals might benefit from an interactive mathematics application set in a jungle theme, where problems involve counting animated animals.

Conclusion,parents have to be aware of their children health and time that they are spending. Instead, parents could encourage outdoor activities or family games to support their children’s overall development. Therefore, I strongly believe that parents should not buy phone to their children and let them spend hours on screen

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