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Band 5+: Some people think that individuals are more dependent on each other today. Other believe people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, being independent has became a great issue for some people.While some argue that people are now relying on each other, I side with those who consider individuals are more independent than before.

On the one hand, it might be true that some people are dependent to someone for variety of reasons.Firstly, cultural perpective is a major reasons why some people still are not independent. This is because there are some cultures that ban living separately for some members of family. For example, in my culture it is forbidden to move another home, when your parents are old and not able to subsist for themselves, while it is the same for girls that they can not leave their home and be independent until their marriage.As a result, it leads to being relient on their parents. Secondly, health perspective is a next great threat for being independent. Some individuals that are not able to move to do their personal needs, which creates a significant barrier for disabled people.

On the flip side of the coin, most indivisuals, myself included, who feel that nowadays being independent is under a great demand for some extend. Educational perspective is a first cause for being independent especially for younger generations. This is because most of the graduaters prefer to study abroad, which leads them being independent. As a result, this student learn more from independent life, which boost their confidence and self-esteem and broaden their horizons while studying. Secondly, financial perpective hit the records for being independent, because most people are looking for better jobs to other countries in order to get high paid salary, which leads to a migration and of course to independence.

In conclusion, even though some people support being dependent to someone, it is more essential to be independent for personal growth and for future career

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