🔥 Today Only: Save 30% on Premium — Offer Ends Soon! - Upgrade Now!
Opinion

Band 4+: Some say that because many people are living much longer, the age at which people retire from work should be raised considerably. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Note: Both the topic and the essay were created by one of our users.

For some people retire age should be raised since people’s life time is much longer than past. I completely disagree with this opinion and think that even people are living much longer, retire age should be stable.

First of all, it is very difficult to going to work for elder people as physical conditions. Elder people have a different types of illnesses therefore they have to rest at their retire age. Moreover, even many people are living much longer, people do not stay young so they are getting older on the same age. For instance, a person who have a physical ability because of aged have to go to work for gain a money is not fair and not suitable for human rights. That’s why it is more important to choose retire from work should not be raised.

Secondly, people are spare most of their times for themselves. In other words, especially elder people should interested in their health, hobbies, family members, resting etc. rather than working. For example, an elder person who close to end of their life want to spare time with their grandchild and another family members. Likewise, it is their natural right that doing what they want rather than working. Thus, going to work at the elder ages should not be necessity.

To sum up, I strongly believe that the age at which people retire from work should not be raised because it is very hard to working for elder people as their physical conditions and elder people should spare their times for themselves.

Word Count: 258

Essays On The Same Topic:

Some say that because many people are living much longer, the age at which people retire from work should be raised considerably. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

As the life expectancy increases, some people say that retirement age needs to extended. This statement spark a debate whether its necessary to delay the age of retirement or not. Im totaly against this view, because as we grew older we need to rest more too. On the one hand, raising the retirement age can […]

Some say that because many people are living much longer, the age at which people retire from work should be raised considerably. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people believe that as average life expectancy is surging, the age of retirement should be grown mutually. I definitely disagree with this opinion, because it can lead to negative consequences to people’s health conditions and might affect life expectancy vice versa. In the past centuries, humans’ lifetime lasted less in comparision to today, because […]

Some say that because many people are living much longer, the age at which people retire from work should be raised considerably. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that many people live much longer than before, so the age of retirement should be increased. My opinion aligns with the above opinion. First of all, increasing the retirement age can help the economy. If people work for more years, they can continue to pay taxes, which helps the government. This money […]

Some say that because many people are living much longer, the age at which people retire from work should be raised considerably. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people argue that plenty of people are surviving numerous longer,at the age which individuals retire from the work should be enhanced considerably. I completely disagree with this statement Because, does not exist energy like young excitement and lose significantly work productivity. secondly it is required to expolre whole world.. One the one hand, although […]

Some say that because many people are living much longer, the age at which people retire from work should be raised considerably. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that the retirement age at jobs should be extended significantly because of their life expectancy also increased. I completely disagree with the statement. While there are several drawbacks of not extending the retirement age, it has myriad benefits as well. On the embark, there are a number of benefits why retirement age […]

See All

Other Topics:

International travel is becoming cheaper and cheaper, and more countries are now opening their doors to foreign visitors. Do you think that the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

Travelling abroad is becoming more affordable than ever before and many nations are paving the way for more tourists to come. From my perspective, I believe its advantages outweigh drawbacks due to the positive impact on the economy and cultural exchange. On the one hand, cheap international travel can negatively affect tourist destinations and local […]

Some people think governments should spend money looking for life on other planets, while others believe that there are many unsolved problems on Earth. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Some people believe government should spend money search for life on other planets, While some of them argue It is just a waste of public when it has problems on earth. This essay will discuss both view and give my own opinion. Many people offer to investigate new life on other planets to live in […]

Some people say that television should be mainly used to educate and inform viewers, while others believe it should be used for entertainment. Discuss both views and give your opinion. in your words

Television is only for enjoyment as per some individuals, while others think it is a source of learning and educating ourselves. Nowadays, most of the teenagers or middle age people binge watch series and television for long hours which really steals time. Television results in addiction for most of the youngsters. This can be a […]

In the past, shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby. To what extent do you think this is a positive trend? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge.

Back then, shopping was generally considered as a routine domestic task, yet this tendency has evolved from rare prehomenon to a casual thing. Nowadays scarcely a day goes by without going on a shopping spree. According to surveys, majority of people suffer from this habitual addiction. First and foremost, such a generally accepted trend takes […]

Because more and more people read the news on the Internet, newspapers will no longer be the most important source of news for the majority of people. Do you agree or disagree with that statement?

Nowadays, many people belive that newspaper are becoming less important because we can easily access news on the internet. I partly agree with this idea, although I think newspapers still have some value. On the one hand it is clear that online news is more convenient and up-to-date. With smartphones and the internet, people can […]

Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money. Others disagree and think that a good salary leads to a better life. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There are conflicting views on whether it is favourable for employees to prioritize job satisfaction, or greater earnings even if they are not enjoying their profession. On the one hand, some may argue that dissatisfaction in their profession is manageable as long as their financial state is improving. By earning sufficient money to provide for […]

See All
We have detected unusual activity on your device.
Please verify your identity to continue.
Note: This verification step won't sign you in. If you have a premium account, please log in to access the service as usual.
Google/Gmail Verification
Or verify using Email/Code
We've sent a verification code to:
youremail@gmail.com (Not your email?)
Enter it below to complete the verification process.
Ensure your email address is correct, your inbox is not full, and you check your spam folder. If no email arrives, consider using an alternative email.
You will need a Premium plan to perform your action!
Note: If you already have a premium account, please log in to access our services as usual.

Plans & Pricing

Our mission is to make quality education accessible for everyone.
However, to keep our hardworking team running and this service alive, we genuinely need your support!
By opting for a premium plan, not only do you sustain us in achieving the mission, but you also unlock advanced features to enrich your learning experience.

Free

For learners who aren't pressed for time

What's included on Free
100+ Cambridge IELTS Tests
Instant IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Evaluation (2 times/month)
Instant IELTS Speaking Part 1, 2, & 3 Evaluation (5 times/month)
Instant IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Essay Generator (2 times/month)
500+ Dictation & Shadowing Exercises
100+ Pronunciation Exercises
Flashcards
Other Advanced Tools

Premium

For those serious about advancing their English proficiency, and for IELTS candidates aspiring to boost their band score by 1-2 points (especially in writing & speaking) in just 30 days or less

What's included on Premium
Save Your IELTS Test Progress
Unlock All Courses & IELTS Tests
Unlimited AI Conversations
Unlimited AI Writing Enhancement Exercises
Unlimited IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Evaluation
Unlimited IELTS Speaking Part 1, 2, & 3 Evaluation
Checked Answers Will Not Be Published
Unlimited IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Essay Generator
Unlimited IELTS Speaking Part 1, 2, & 3 Sample Generator
Unlimited Usage Of Advanced Tools
Priority Support within 24h (12-month plan only)

Due to the nature of our service and the provided free trials, payments are non-refundable.
Nếu bạn là người Việt Nam và không có hoặc không muốn trả bằng credit/debit cards, bạn có thể thanh toán bằng phương thức chuyển khoản:



Chọn gói:
419,000₫ 277,000 ₫ cho gói 1 tháng (chỉ 9,233₫/ngày)
1,239,000₫ 597,000 ₫ cho gói 3 tháng (chỉ 6,633₫/ngày)
2,469,000₫ 1,027,000 ₫ cho gói 6 tháng (chỉ 5,706₫/ngày)
4,929,000₫ 1,417,000 ₫ cho gói 12 tháng (chỉ 3,936₫/ngày)


Sau khi chuyển khoản, vui lòng đợi trình duyệt tự động điều hướng bạn trở lại Engnovate và bạn sẽ ngay lập tức nhận được mã kích hoạt tài khoản premium.
Nếu có lỗi xảy ra, bạn có thể liên hệ với team thông qua một trong các phương thức: email đến helloengnovate@gmail.com hoặc nhắn tin qua facebook.com/engnovate.
Vì toàn bộ công cụ trên website đều có thể sử dụng thử miễn phí, Engnovate không hỗ trợ hoàn tiền.