🔥 Today Only: Save 30% on Premium — Offer Ends Soon! - Upgrade Now!
Opinion

Band 6+: Task 2: While some people claim that advertising drives economic growth, others suggest it harms society by making individuals feel unhappy with themselves and their belongings. Consider both arguments and present your viewpoint. Explain your viewpoint with reasons and include appropriate examples based on your knowledge or experiences.

Note: Both the topic and the essay were created by one of our users.

One school of thought holds that product promotion enhances countries’ economy yet others believe that it has detrimental effects and lead to feeling sad about people’s possessions. While acknowledging the reasons why some support the latter, I still agree more with the former.

On the one hand, it is understandable why some argue that ads may make people dissatisfied with their purchases, resulting in adverse impacts on society. This can be attributed to the fact that firms promote products with perfect functions and qualities. In addition to this, they sometimes compare the promoted product with the others to highlight their product’s perfection, leading to a sense of dissatisfaction and unhappiness among clients because of their belongings’ imperfection. This therefore may manipulate customers purchasing the promoted products. Nevertheless, not all people are unhappy with what they have because of the better purchase advertised. This is because factors affect clients’ decision not only about how good the products are, but also prices, appropriate purposes and targets to suit consumers’ needs.

On the other hand, I side with those advocating the idea that ads have positive impacts on the economy. Promotion can make a business become more recognisable, particularly start-ups and small businesses, if a company launches a successful marketing campaign. For instance, a cosmetic brand named Rhode often delivers the new product to influencers to use and share their thoughts on social media platforms such as Tiktok, Youtube and Facebook before the official product reveal, which draws public attention effectively. Another advantage of ads is that it can significantly increase sales owing to the fact that clients often prefer to purchase items from well-known and good reputation corporations. As a result, their sales will rise considerably. For example, it is reported that Rhode achieves roughly 70% sales growth over a year. This eventually led to the overall economic growth because the profits of these companies contribute to the country’s economy by taxing.

In conclusion, while marketing campaigns may cause negative impacts due to making people unhappy with their possessions, I personally think that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. In fact, ads improve brand visibility and sales.

Word Count: 354

Essays On The Same Topic:

Task 2: While some people claim that advertising drives economic growth, others suggest it harms society by making individuals feel unhappy with themselves and their belongings. Consider both arguments and present your viewpoint. Explain your viewpoint with reasons and include appropriate examples based on your knowledge or experiences.

In the modern era, advertising has become an omnipresent force, weaving itself into the fabric of daily life. While many economists argue that marketing is a catalyst for financial prosperity, a growing number of critics contend that it breeds deep-seated dissatisfaction by distorting our sense of self and reality. In my view, although advertising undeniably […]

Task 2: While some people claim that advertising drives economic growth, others suggest it harms society by making individuals feel unhappy with themselves and their belongings. Consider both arguments and present your viewpoint. Explain your viewpoint with reasons and include appropriate examples based on your knowledge or experiences.

In recent years, there has been a controversial issue surrounding advertisements’ impacts. It is believed that advertising promotes economic development, others argue that it causes harmful effects on individuals’ feelings and relationships. The essay will elaborate on both views before showing the reason why I am in favor of the former viewpoints. Several individuals claim […]

See All

Other Topics:

Some people say it is better to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this ?

Some individuals argue that it is essential to maintain your home and workplace in an organized. I completely agree with this statement because it ensures a healthy and friendly personal and work environment and brings ease and efficiency to your life. Firstly, a well-organized home and workplace are crucial to maintaining social relationships with other […]

Some people think that the range of technology currently available is increasing the gap between rich people and poor people. Others think that it is causing the opposite effect. Discuss both and give your opinion.

Many people think that innovations are widening the gap between poor and wealth, whereas others believe the polar process is happening. In my opinion technological advancements contribute more to the isolation of rich from poor than to decreasing the gap between these two categories of people. As newt echnologies appear, the first people to get […]

Some people think that exercise is the key to health while others feel that having a balance diet is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

A common belief is that physical exercises are useful for human health, however some people consider that a balanced diet has a more impact on our body. In my opinion, there is a connection between those that can have many benefits for well-being, if these two trends will work together. If you do activies you […]

There is a growing demand for fresh water nowadays and this is becoming a global problem. What are the causes and solutions?

In some countries, fresh water is now running dry at an alarming rate. This issue stems from various causes, and addressing it requires a comprehensive, multifaceted approach. One major cause associated with a lack of freshwater supplies is that farming requires large amounts of water. In fact, farming accounts for 70 percent of withdrawals. As […]

Task 2: Some parents try to decide their children's future careers and personal choices because they want them to become good citizens and successful adults. However, they often ignore their children's own opinions and interests. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some parents believe that taking control of their children’s future careers and personal choices is the most effective way to ensure that they become responsible citizens and successful adults. While I acknowledge that parents can offer valuable guidance based on their experience, I only partly agree with this view because important life decisions should also […]

See All
We have detected unusual activity on your device.
Please verify your identity to continue.
Note: This verification step won't sign you in. If you have a premium account, please log in to access the service as usual.
Google/Gmail Verification
Or verify using Email/Code
We've sent a verification code to:
youremail@gmail.com (Not your email?)
Enter it below to complete the verification process.
Ensure your email address is correct, your inbox is not full, and you check your spam folder. If no email arrives, consider using an alternative email.
You will need a Premium plan to perform your action!
Note: If you already have a premium account, please log in to access our services as usual.

Plans & Pricing

Our mission is to make quality education accessible for everyone.
However, to keep our hardworking team running and this service alive, we genuinely need your support!
By opting for a premium plan, not only do you sustain us in achieving the mission, but you also unlock advanced features to enrich your learning experience.

Free

For learners who aren't pressed for time

What's included on Free
100+ Cambridge IELTS Tests
Instant IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Evaluation (2 times/month)
Instant IELTS Speaking Part 1, 2, & 3 Evaluation (5 times/month)
Instant IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Essay Generator (2 times/month)
500+ Dictation & Shadowing Exercises
100+ Pronunciation Exercises
Flashcards
Other Advanced Tools

Premium

For those serious about advancing their English proficiency, and for IELTS candidates aspiring to boost their band score by 1-2 points (especially in writing & speaking) in just 30 days or less

What's included on Premium
Save Your IELTS Test Progress & Analyze Mistakes By Question Type
Unlock All Courses, IELTS Tests, Section & Part Practice
Unlimited AI Conversations
Unlimited AI Writing Enhancement Exercises
Unlimited IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Evaluation
Unlimited IELTS Speaking Part 1, 2, & 3 Evaluation
Checked Answers Will Not Be Published
Unlimited IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Essay Generator
Unlimited IELTS Speaking Part 1, 2, & 3 Sample Generator
Unlimited Usage Of Advanced Tools & AI Features
Priority Support within 24h (12-month plan only)

Due to the nature of our service and the provided free trials, payments are non-refundable.
Nếu bạn là người Việt Nam và không có hoặc không muốn trả bằng credit/debit cards, bạn có thể thanh toán bằng phương thức chuyển khoản:



Chọn gói:
419,000₫ 277,000 ₫ cho gói 1 tháng (chỉ 9,233₫/ngày)
1,239,000₫ 597,000 ₫ cho gói 3 tháng (chỉ 6,633₫/ngày)
2,469,000₫ 1,027,000 ₫ cho gói 6 tháng (chỉ 5,706₫/ngày)
4,929,000₫ 1,417,000 ₫ cho gói 12 tháng (chỉ 3,936₫/ngày)


Sau khi chuyển khoản, vui lòng đợi trình duyệt tự động điều hướng bạn trở lại Engnovate và bạn sẽ ngay lập tức nhận được mã kích hoạt tài khoản premium.
Nếu có lỗi xảy ra, bạn có thể liên hệ với team thông qua một trong các phương thức: email đến helloengnovate@gmail.com hoặc nhắn tin qua facebook.com/engnovate.
Vì toàn bộ công cụ trên website đều có thể sử dụng thử miễn phí, Engnovate không hỗ trợ hoàn tiền.