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Band 5+: You are going to visit Manchester in the UK for a short training course but you have not arranged accommodation yet. Write a letter to the accommodation office of your future college. In your letter introduce yourself explain what type of accommodation you are looking for request information on that type of accommodation. Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir/Madam,

I am going to visit Manchester, UK. I have a short training course but I have not arranged my accommodation yet. I am writing to you as I would like to inquired for looking any accommodation which could be available for me

I am looking for night trip accommodation include a baggage to bring my stuff for the purpose of staying while in Manchester, UK. In detail of the place I wish to have is the accommodation with specific type of sleeping bus with single seat and the window can be open also have feature like smart tv, air conditioner and free wifi and then have a clean toilet. The accommodation include a meal and plug for phone and can stop for the moment in the famous tourist spot and in the mosque for pray and take a rest.

I look forward to receiving your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Riswandi

Word Count: 151

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

accommodation: 5

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Task Response

5.5

The letter adequately addresses the task, but the request for accommodation is not clear and specific enough. The student should focus on the type of accommodation they are looking for and provide more details about their needs.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter lacks a clear structure and flow. The student should organize their thoughts and use connecting words to improve the coherence and cohesion of the letter.

Lexical Resource

The student uses a range of vocabulary, but some words are not used appropriately. The student should pay attention to the accuracy and precision of their vocabulary.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect the clarity and understanding of the message. The student should focus on improving their grammar and punctuation.

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