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Band 7+: The bar chart gives information about the number of overseas Japanese tourists between 1985 and 1995, and the line graph illustrates percentage of those going to Australia between 1985 and 1994.

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The image contains a bar chart showing 'Japanese tourists travelling abroad' (in millions) and a line graph showing 'Australia's share of Japan's tourist market' (percentage). The number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad was: ~4.9 million in 1985, ~5.5 in 1986, ~6.8 in 1987, ~8.4 in 1988, ~9.6 in 1989, ~11.0 in 1990, ~10.7 in 1991, ~11.8 in 1992, ~12.1 in 1993, ~13.5 in 1994, and ~15.4 in 1995. The percentage of these tourists going to Australia was: 2.0% in 1985, 3.0% in 1986, 4.0% in 1987, ~4.8% in 1988, ~4.2% in 1989, ~4.8% in 1990, ~5.2% in 1991, ~5.6% in 1992, ~6.2% in 1993, and 6.0% in 1994.

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The bar graph shows the number of overseas traveled by local Japanese people from 1985 to 1995, and the line graph represents the proportion of Japanese tourists who went to Australia during 1985 and 1994, units were measured in millions. Overall, trips from Japan to foreign countries peaked in 1995, while explorers making those trips visited Australia the most in 1993.

It can be seen from the bar chart that, at the outset of the phase, the number of travelers going abroad from Japan stood at just over 4 million. The graph showed a clear upward trend throughout the whole period, with a slight fluctuation in 1991. In the last year given, the figure had approximately tripled, reaching over 14 million.

Journeys to Australia from Japan accounted for just 2% in 1985. The line graph displayed a rising pattern in the following years, although there were fluctuations both in 1989 and 1994. In 1998, the number dropped from 5 to 4 percent, while the second decrease was not significant. By the end of the period, journeys from Japan to Australia made up 6 % of the total.

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australia: 4

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Task Response

The report covers the main trends and features of both graphs, providing a reasonable overview of the data. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions. For instance, the peak in overall Japanese tourists was in 1995 (15.4 million), not 1993. Also, the report mentions '14 million' for the last year, but the actual value is 15.4 million. The report also mentions 'In 1998, the number dropped from 5 to 4 percent', but the graph only goes up to 1994. To improve, ensure greater accuracy in data reporting and avoid including information outside the given timeframe. Also, try to include more specific data points to support your trend descriptions.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with a clear overview and separate paragraphs for each graph. However, the connection between sentences could be strengthened in some places to improve the flow. For example, in the second paragraph, elaborating on the 'slight fluctuation in 1991' would enhance coherence. Also, ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single main idea to maintain clarity.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, such as 'outset of the phase,' 'upward trend,' and 'fluctuations.' However, there's room to incorporate more precise and sophisticated vocabulary related to trends and data description. For instance, instead of 'a clear upward trend,' consider using 'a consistent upward trajectory' or 'a marked increase.' Also, vary the language used to describe changes (e.g., 'rose sharply,' 'declined marginally'). Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report generally demonstrates good grammatical control, but there are a few errors that need attention. For example, 'overseas traveled' should be 'overseas travel' or 'travel abroad.' Also, 'In 1998, the number dropped from 5 to 4 percent' contains a factual error since the graph ends in 1994. Proofread carefully to eliminate such inaccuracies and minor grammatical slips. Vary sentence structures to showcase a wider range of grammatical skills.

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