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Band 5+: Schools should take more responsibility for the health of today's children. 30 10 To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Today, there are controversial issue about whether schools have to take more responsibility for the children’s overall wellbeing. Some agree that educational enterprises should take care of the children’ health thoroughly. However, others claim that this responsibility must not be implemented by only these educational places. I agree that, children may completely harness the benefits of their schools , if their health are looked after by their schools.

Regarding the idea that school might have less interest for children’s health care, it should be noted that every child need support and care by their teachers or other officials who work with them. Today majority of children need special care because they might no have one of their parents or even none of them , so if their school officials pay less attention to them, they will be much more vulnerable to their current positions, and it will deminish their productivity. For example, most of children may have no enthusiasm on continuing their education because of the indifferent attitudes of their schools. In order to face such serious cases, all school staff should do their utmost for kids’ health conditions. The more care schools have towards to children, the more productive success they will poccess.

On top of that, it is irrefutable that schools play a vital role in children’s health care, This is why, these distinguished people should preserve children a lot. Since children stay at any educational entreprises more than four hours during a day, their health states should be under control of the very schools. Additionally, their health should not be neglected by the responsible people at schools. Moreover, if schools do not look after children who study there, it may not only influence their health badly, it may have also detrimental consequences on their education. Being in a bad mood or feeling unwell, children have some consentrational problems; thereby some distractions caused by their health lead to poor learning procedures for them.

In conclusion, no matter today people navigate complex life standards or not, they will value every child and be helpful in their wellfare. Consequently, I totally agree that schools should be much more interested in kids.

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