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Band 9: Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination, while others think that money and appearance are more important.Discuss both views,give your opinion

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In recent years, there has been an ongoing debate about what leads to success: personal qualities such as determination, persistence, and hard work, or external factors like luck and social connections. While it is true that luck and connections can play a role in one’s life, I side with those who believe that hard work and perseverance are the key to prosperity.

With determination and resilience – the ability to bounce back from setbacks and failures – comes true success. People who possess unyielding perseverance are committed to working hard to accomplish their goals through the perpetual cycle of life’s challenges, pushing themselves to the limit and achieving great feats in both personal and professional realms. Hard-working individuals tend to focus on self-improvement rather than comparison, learning from failures and adapting to life’s hardships, which ultimately leads to lasting success and a higher standard of living. A good case in point is Elon Musk. Had it not been for his perseverance, unyielding mindset, and ability to recover from numerous obstacles and setbacks, he would not have become one of the most prominent business leaders in the world.

On the other hand, external factors such as luck and social relationships can also play a supporting role. With encouragement and emotional backing from loved ones, individuals often feel more confident when coping with challenges. This emotional support can motivate them to work harder and maintain a positive outlook on life. However, goals cannot be achieved solely through luck or support, as success ultimately depends on personal commitment, discipline, and determination.

To conclude, while some argue that prosperity depends on luck and social connections, I strongly believe that hard work and persistence are the true foundations of success. Without these qualities, it would be impossible for individuals to achieve their objectives or succeed in their personal and professional endeavors.

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