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Band 4+: The pie charts below show the proportion of people who used three different modes of transport (car, public transport, and bicycle/walking) to commute to work in three countries (A, B, and C) in 2010 and 2015.

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The image presents six pie charts detailing transportation methods. For Country A - 2010, the distribution is Car 60%, Public Transport 25%, and Bicycle/Walking 15%. For Country B - 2010, it is Car 70%, Public Transport 20%, and Bicycle/Walking 10%. For Country C - 2010, the figures are Car 80%, Public Transport 15%, and Bicycle/Walking 5%. For Country A - 2015, the data shows Car 55%, Public Transport 30%, and Bicycle/Walking 15%. For Country B - 2015, the breakdown is Car 62%, Public Transport 28%, and Bicycle/Walking 10%. Finally, for Country C - 2015, the percentages are Car 72%, Public Transport 20%, and Bicycle/Walking 8%.

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The provided charts illustrate the percentage of people who utilized car, public transport, and bicycle for transport to go for work in three nations between 2010 and 2015.

Overall, it is clear car uses by the majority of individuals throughout the period, while public transport acounted for the second transport medium. In addition, bicycle had the lowest proportion in the whole countries.

Regarding cars, most citizens were utilize cars for transport, cars represented approximately 60% at country A in 2010 and this figure roses in country B and C to around 80% in 2010, while bicycle made up the smallest figure in country A, public transport constituted approximately 25% at country A in 2010 and became decreased to about 5% in country B and C.

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The report addresses the task but contains some inaccuracies and omissions. The description of the data is not always precise, and there are some issues with grammar and vocabulary. To improve, focus on providing more accurate and detailed descriptions of the data, and ensure that your grammar and vocabulary are accurate and appropriate. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

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The report demonstrates some organization, but the flow of information is not always smooth. The introduction provides a basic overview, and the overall statement attempts to summarize the main trends. However, the body paragraphs lack clear topic sentences and transitions, making it difficult to follow the comparisons between countries and years. Paragraphing could be improved to separate distinct ideas more effectively. Consider using more cohesive devices to link sentences and paragraphs, and ensure each paragraph focuses on a specific aspect of the data.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is relatively simple and repetitive. While the report conveys the basic information, it lacks the range and precision needed for a higher score. There is some attempt to use appropriate vocabulary related to proportions and transport, but it is not consistently accurate or varied. To improve, try to incorporate a wider range of synonyms and more precise language to describe the data. For example, instead of repeatedly using 'percentage,' consider using 'proportion,' 'share,' or 'figure.' Also, avoid informal language.

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The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. There are issues with verb tense, subject-verb agreement, and article usage. Sentence structure is also quite basic, limiting the complexity of the analysis. To improve, focus on correcting grammatical errors and using a wider range of sentence structures. Pay attention to verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and article usage. Practice writing more complex sentences to express relationships between data points more effectively.

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